These were the first sketches/photos for the concept development part of the blog. I was trying to create an environment that resembled that time when Cervantes was in prison where he wrote the second part of the book, even tho I managed to create the atmosphere but the results didn't had poster quality, they were more like editorial material. So I decided that I should come with something simpler with less stuff going around and that make the message easier to read (bigger).
This is the second part in the progress into refinement, as you can see I reduced the amount of elements in the composition and tried to make the type larger and easier to read. Still, the texture of the wall brick was too noisy and between it and the projection the type became harder to read.
This is the final refined version of the poster but not quite. Even tho I achieved to communicate the message in a clearer way I also managed to simplify the composition and get rid of the noise of the bricks. I am not very satisfied with the way this ended up looking so I will definitely try to remake it in the future, with a little more effort in the making.
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