At this stage I am very happy with how successful my concept is by communicating the personality and essence of my client; Mercedes Padro. During critique I got very useful feedback which I tried to use for this refinement phase. Some of those changes where: the incorporation of the patter in the two sides, removing the rectangles that were containing the type. The type in the back panel is now easier to see, the type in the front panel now sits harmoniously inside the image circles without being to hard to read. I also added a few words in french which speaks to Mercedes's passion for the renaissance and impressionism.
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