The second billboard down and the fourth program down are my favorites by far. The hats are still recognizable when cut off, but I also see the stage more strongly than when the full hat shape is shown.
These two also have the most energetic, diagonal compositions. In the fourth billboard down, I really like the connection on both sides of the hat to the lettering, but it's not as energetic as #2.
I agree with Myles that the date is too integrated into the title or the title's style. It's sort of hidden right now. You might need to just be more straight forward with it (sadly); one line of text placed somewhere outside of the title. It's boring, but it might just be what we have to do for quick legibility.
The second billboard down and the fourth program down are my favorites by far. The hats are still recognizable when cut off, but I also see the stage more strongly than when the full hat shape is shown.
ReplyDeleteThese two also have the most energetic, diagonal compositions. In the fourth billboard down, I really like the connection on both sides of the hat to the lettering, but it's not as energetic as #2.
I agree with Myles that the date is too integrated into the title or the title's style. It's sort of hidden right now. You might need to just be more straight forward with it (sadly); one line of text placed somewhere outside of the title. It's boring, but it might just be what we have to do for quick legibility.